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Penguin Express - 30th Sepember 2012
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Penguin Express - 30th Sepember 2012
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Editor's Note
Welcome to the first edition of the Penguin Express! An unofficial newsletter o9f TNCPCPF. I don't have really much time to explain everything, but I'll just tell you all how it started. At first, I did a newsltter in Microsoft Word and emailed it to everyone in June (CPCPF News), but it didn't take off (my mother wouldn't let me) so I'll do it in post form like this instead. Anyway, this edition will be quite short, I actually intended to do it in the morning, but I had to go somewhere. I won't drag anymore of your time. Happy Reading!
Nicktang10
Meet the Team
Here are the staff of the newsletter:
Mango Smango
Port_A_Build
Gotchee
Ccpenguin8
TotallyAwesome
JackPirate45
I have 2 slots open - CP Reporter and Forum Reporter. Pay will start from next month, since not many of you have PMed me the material. Please do so by 13 October 2012.
Application closes on Tuesday.
Name:
Position:
Temp or Pernament?
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CP Report
By Mango Smango
Hi! I saw that I am the CP reporter for the newspaper. So here is my material! (Tell me if I am doing this right, Idk if I am writing the right thing) And, feel free to edit anything out if the other CP Reporter already wrote it.
CP News:
There are tons of new exiting things on Club Penguin this week. First, the Fall Fair is here! You can play games to earn prizes. Also, there is a new pin out, which is an ice cream cone. You can get it in the ski lodge! And like every week, there is a new Club Penguin times! And, there is a new Field Op for EPF Agents. Those are all of the updates! Make sure you log on soon so you don't miss out! ~Mango Smango, CP Reporter
CP Tip
By Port_A_Build
The candy mode of Pizzatron 3000 gives more coins than pizza mode.
Jokes&Riddles
By Gotchee
Riddles:
What does the policeman have in his sandwitch?
-Traffic Jam!
What do you call a bear with no teeth?
- A gummy bear!
What do you call a fish with no eyes?
- A fsh!
Jokes:
.One math book says to another " Why are you sad? ". The other book replied " I have a lot of problems.... "
.If you choke a smurf, what color does it turn into?
.Georges father says to his son " Son, if you get an A in this test, I will give you 100 dollars"
The next day, after class , George says to his teacher " Sir, how does earning 50 dollars sound like?..."
That's all for this edition, I have to go now. The next edition, we promise you, will be far better. Don't hesitate to post comments or feedback!
Editor's Note
Welcome to the first edition of the Penguin Express! An unofficial newsletter o9f TNCPCPF. I don't have really much time to explain everything, but I'll just tell you all how it started. At first, I did a newsltter in Microsoft Word and emailed it to everyone in June (CPCPF News), but it didn't take off (my mother wouldn't let me) so I'll do it in post form like this instead. Anyway, this edition will be quite short, I actually intended to do it in the morning, but I had to go somewhere. I won't drag anymore of your time. Happy Reading!
Nicktang10
Meet the Team
Here are the staff of the newsletter:
Mango Smango
Port_A_Build
Gotchee
Ccpenguin8
TotallyAwesome
JackPirate45
I have 2 slots open - CP Reporter and Forum Reporter. Pay will start from next month, since not many of you have PMed me the material. Please do so by 13 October 2012.
Application closes on Tuesday.
Name:
Position:
Temp or Pernament?
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
CP Report
By Mango Smango
Hi! I saw that I am the CP reporter for the newspaper. So here is my material! (Tell me if I am doing this right, Idk if I am writing the right thing) And, feel free to edit anything out if the other CP Reporter already wrote it.
CP News:
There are tons of new exiting things on Club Penguin this week. First, the Fall Fair is here! You can play games to earn prizes. Also, there is a new pin out, which is an ice cream cone. You can get it in the ski lodge! And like every week, there is a new Club Penguin times! And, there is a new Field Op for EPF Agents. Those are all of the updates! Make sure you log on soon so you don't miss out! ~Mango Smango, CP Reporter
CP Tip
By Port_A_Build
The candy mode of Pizzatron 3000 gives more coins than pizza mode.
Jokes&Riddles
By Gotchee
Riddles:
What does the policeman have in his sandwitch?
-Traffic Jam!
What do you call a bear with no teeth?
- A gummy bear!
What do you call a fish with no eyes?
- A fsh!
Jokes:
.One math book says to another " Why are you sad? ". The other book replied " I have a lot of problems.... "
.If you choke a smurf, what color does it turn into?
.Georges father says to his son " Son, if you get an A in this test, I will give you 100 dollars"
The next day, after class , George says to his teacher " Sir, how does earning 50 dollars sound like?..."
That's all for this edition, I have to go now. The next edition, we promise you, will be far better. Don't hesitate to post comments or feedback!
Last edited by Nicktang10 on 30/9/2012, 3:12 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Penguin Express - 30th Sepember 2012
Oh no, I forgot to send in my material. Sorry, I've been really busy. I'll just send it in for the next edition, then?
P.S This was actually posted in the morning, for my time zone.
P.P.S Generally speaking, you shouldn't correct your authors in the paper - it looks unprofessional. Normally, you would send a PM to your authors saying what they could do better BEFORE the newspaper goes to print, so they have your feedback, but the newspaper doesn't seem unprofessional. Just my tip.
P.S This was actually posted in the morning, for my time zone.

P.P.S Generally speaking, you shouldn't correct your authors in the paper - it looks unprofessional. Normally, you would send a PM to your authors saying what they could do better BEFORE the newspaper goes to print, so they have your feedback, but the newspaper doesn't seem unprofessional. Just my tip.

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Re: Penguin Express - 30th Sepember 2012
Thanks! Anyway, I cut out the comments.Staff members, could you write a more detailed article? Thanks
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Re: Penguin Express - 30th Sepember 2012
I like your newpaper and I think I should give my feedback on it:
Don't comment on your author's work in the newspaper. Do you see an article in a newspaper with comments like "What a boring article."? All this should be sent in a PM to the Author, a newspaper shouldn't go to print like this.
Secondly, I know it's going to be better first time but first impressions are important. If a user doesn't like what they see the first time, most of the time they don't come back again. When it's a first issue, show people how good your Newspaper is.
Thirdly, it seems you made a little mistake by copying and pasting all of Mango's PM with her introduction (like: "Here's my work!") in instead of just copying and pasting just the work. Remember to read it for errors.
EDIT: I'm glad you edited out the comments, it looks much better now. Also, I can't see the image either.
Best of luck with Penguin Express!
Sindar
Don't comment on your author's work in the newspaper. Do you see an article in a newspaper with comments like "What a boring article."? All this should be sent in a PM to the Author, a newspaper shouldn't go to print like this.
Secondly, I know it's going to be better first time but first impressions are important. If a user doesn't like what they see the first time, most of the time they don't come back again. When it's a first issue, show people how good your Newspaper is.
Thirdly, it seems you made a little mistake by copying and pasting all of Mango's PM with her introduction (like: "Here's my work!") in instead of just copying and pasting just the work. Remember to read it for errors.

EDIT: I'm glad you edited out the comments, it looks much better now. Also, I can't see the image either.

Best of luck with Penguin Express!
Sindar
Re: Penguin Express - 30th Sepember 2012
Sindar Toffe wrote:I like your newpaper and I think I should give my feedback on it:
Don't comment on your author's work in the newspaper. Do you see an article in a newspaper with comments like "What a boring article."? All this should be sent in a PM to the Author, a newspaper shouldn't go to print like this.
Secondly, I know it's going to be better first time but first impressions are important. If a user doesn't like what they see the first time, most of the time they don't come back again. When it's a first issue, show people how good your Newspaper is.
Thirdly, it seems you made a little mistake by copying and pasting all of Mango's PM with her introduction (like: "Here's my work!") in instead of just copying and pasting just the work. Remember to read it for errors.
EDIT: I'm glad you edited out the comments, it looks much better now. Also, I can't see the image either.
Best of luck with Penguin Express!
Sindar
Yeah, this is a small bug we've encountered. Maygirl has fixed it in most sections, but in a few places you can't see images.

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Re: Penguin Express - 30th Sepember 2012
I was in a rush...I only had 15 minutes to post the newsletter
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