Revenge of the Sahara- Chapter 1

This is a new series I'm starting!
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When the Big Bad Wolf fell into the pot, he discovered his sins and made a peace treaty with the pigs. The pigs forgave him and they became friends. As a token, the wolf enriched the world with his happiness. Then, he made a house of platinum right next to Leon (the third pig)’s brick house.
Meanwhile, evil things were cooking up. Genghis Khan had secretly sent a battalion to Iowa, where the pigs and the wolf were staying. He conquered the region and took the animals as prisoners of war. Since he was against killing animals, he dumped them in the Sahara on June 19, 1256.
“Oh my goodness! We’re stranded here, in the middle of nowhere, and I don’t even have my bricks!!” shouted the third pig.
“Hold on”, said Xriox (the wolf). He looked at Leon. The elder pig was quivering with fear and was almost on the verge to fainting. With his stout pink body and his tiny little legs, he could never make it through the desert!
“If we must survive, we must find water,” said Grityup (the second pig). “You know, us animals can only survive 7 hours without water.” The pig scratched his back and was squinting in the sun, looking for an oasis. Suddenly, he saw some water.
“Guys! I see water!” exclaimed Grityup.
The quartet ran as fast as cheetahs. Everyone could see the water. They were greedy for it, so they wouldn’t stop running. Unfortunately, it was too good to be true.
“You fool! That’s just a mirage! A trick of the light! When we get home, we need to get your eyes checked!” said a furious Kiole (The first pig).
“Ease down,”Xriox said. “It’s a desert, what would you expect?”
Leon was put on watch. Everywhere he could see, he only saw sand. Sand, and a couple of lizards. For thousands of miles, he only saw these two things.

A barren world, a barren landscape, an isolated universe.

Cool story!

VERY good story, Kane. It's a fun and exciting adaptation of the fairytale, the Three Pigs. I'm on the edge of my set and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Its a very fun and interesting story, can't wait to see more!

Interesting ideas and plot, and nice suspense at the end there man. Looking forward to more!