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Post  Nicktang10 7/8/2012, 12:57 pm

Next Story: The Siege and Payback

Chapter One - Going Home

8pm. Time for me to knock off. Today is Friday. Tomorrow, I'll be heading back to Club Penguin for the extended weekend. If it hadn't been a extended weekend, I'd probably be working and working. On and on. In my office, 5th floor, Antarctican Land Transport Authority building, 673 Government Avenue, South Pole City, United States of Antartica.

My name is Nicktang10, CEO of the ALTA. All land transport projects come under ME. I can finally relax. I closed the door to my office and ran down to the subway. Thanks to my government board, Antartica no longer had the traffic jams and car accidents it used to have.

"67th Avenue" the chime beeped. After a short walk to my igloo, I started to open the doorknob. It was eerily quiet. Very strange. But being too tired, I entered my igloo. After a quick shower and a delicious meal, I started to get ready for bed. Just then, the doorbell rang. " Who is it now? I thought, "It's 10pm!" I opened the door. Penguins in ninja suits were there. " Hello and Goodbye for good, ALTA CEO." I grabbed my laser gun and shot down each penguin. but I had missed one. When I thought I was safe...

THUNK! A penguin with an anvil thunked me on my head, leaving me unconcious...

Chapter Two - Kidnapped

When I came to I found myself locked in a cold, dark cell. "Where am I? Let me OUT!" I yelled hysterically in panic. A purple puffle came up to me with an evil smirk on her face. "Finally, the last head of transport. We have the NAA, the CAAA and the FAAA. Now we have you, the head of the ALTA. Without you all controlling the transport force, the USA will never have to ban me and get back their loan!" I groaned. It was Mabel, the irritating, annoying puffle. It's hard enough hearing her yell punctuation at me, now this. I sighed...

Wait? Capturing all of the transport ministries? Isn't that all so...weird? When Mabel was gone, I looked at my usually invisible GPS-cum EPF communicator watch. I was in Terminia! With all those robot cloners, guards, and the island practically in the air, with rain 24/7. Oh well, I'll find some way. Besides, the crew will probably work well...

Meanwhile, at the ALTA headquaters...
"Where is Nick? We can't work without him! AAAAAAAHHHHHH?' Shreds of paper and chaos went through the whole office."We have a meeting, a project, a this, a that, and it's Wednesday! Nick should be back by now if there was a delay!!!"

I checked my Communicator and contacted the EPF. G answered to the phone, " Yes Agent, is there any problem?""I'm being held prisoner in Terminia!HELP ME!" G sighed. "Oh great. another head of a goverment agency captured. I'm afraid we don't have any agents to rescue you left. You'll have to get yourself out of there. In the meantime, I'm giving you 3 more upgraded laser guns, some batteries and 2 weeks worth of food and water. Good Luck!"

The ammo and food rations appeared beside me. I tucked them in my inventory. How do I get out here......

Chapter Three - The Escape

I checked my inventory. THey didn't take everthing, just the weapons and ammo I used to have. "Let's see. A clown outfit, no, EPF Delta suit, no, ah, here it is! A Snoss General Outfit! Let the Escape Begin!"

As soon as the next penguin guard arrived, I knocked him out cold. Placing him in the cell, I changed my feather colour and pulled out a laser gun, shooting down every robot and guard in sight while running towards the launch pad. I f any of the guards caught me, my plan would have been foiled and I would be placed in a high-level security cell. The robots regrouped and regrouped, surrounding me multiple times but I managed to shhot them all down. Hopefully no one would notice them. I then stopped and threw a net over them. Then, I dragged them to the broom closet.

While I had ben running, another guard go t the first guard which I knocked out cold out and brought him to the conference Room. Swiss Ninja, the Kaiser of Snowzerland.

"He escaped?" He yelled in an angry tone, getting louder and louder, 'How dare you let him escape!" The penguiun guard was shivering in fear and looked very nervous. "He...he knocked me out cold" "I don't care. You let him escape. Bring him to THE ROOM!" Swiss ninja commanded. "No!No! NOT THE ROOM!" the penguin guard yelled, "Have mercy, O powerful leader!"

Swiss Ninja simply ignored him. "Out eh? He won't get OUT. I'll deal with this"

Chapter Four - The Epic Battle

Chapter Five - The Fanon City Chase

Coming Soon

Chapter Six - The Plan

Coming Soon

Chapter Seven - Homebound

Coming Soon (September)


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Post  Ccpenguin8 8/8/2012, 12:27 am

Very nice story, Deltang, I can't wait for more. I would have moved this to General Stories, but seeing as you live in Club Penguin and were kidnapped by ninjas, I guess it's a CP story. Great work! Smile
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Post  Momeniccole 8/8/2012, 4:27 am

A good story!I like it.

Ccpenguin8 Says: Don't take this the wrong way, but please could you try to lengthen your posts (ie saying why you like it), because it is sort of spam. Sorry.
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Post  Nicktang10 8/8/2012, 4:34 pm

Thanks for the comments! I'll be posting Chapter 2 this weekend. Stay tuned!
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Post  Ccpenguin8 9/8/2012, 10:54 am

Nicktang10 wrote:Thanks for the comments! I'll be posting Chapter 2 this weekend. Stay tuned!

Fantastic! I'm looking forward to it. I'm going to be on holiday in France that weekend, so I might miss it but I'll read it as soon as I get back. Great story Deltang, I can't wait for the new chapter.
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Post  Nicktang10 12/8/2012, 8:20 am

Part of Chapter 2 is out now. Thanks for all support, and If you wish to be a character, post here.
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Post  Maygirl2 13/8/2012, 1:25 pm

Wow, very interesting, I like it! Exclamation
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Post  Nicktang10 20/8/2012, 4:46 am

Chapter 3&4 are done and will be posted soon.

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Post  Ccpenguin8 27/8/2012, 12:50 pm

Congratulations. Moved to the Good/Finished CP Stories section. Smile
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Post  Nicktang10 27/8/2012, 3:09 pm

Technically it's not finished, but I have already written down the whole story in my notebook. I guess I'll try to release the rest of the story by Sptember.
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Post  Ccpenguin8 27/8/2012, 3:43 pm

Nicktang10 wrote:Technically it's not finished, but I have already written down the whole story in my notebook. I guess I'll try to release the rest of the story by Sptember.

Oh. Would you like me to move it back, then?
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Post  Nicktang10 28/8/2012, 12:51 pm

Yeah, sure. when it's finished, I'll let you know.
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