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Elemental Quest
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Elemental Quest
Based on the TV show, Avatar: The Legend of Aang and The Legend of Korra.
Each planet has its own (one or two) Avatars
Elemental Quest is a story of a young boy, aged 14, named Ran Lei and his sister, Ran Kuei, 12, who discover that they are the two new Avatars of their planet. They have to master all 8 elements, in the order of Fire, Water, Ice, Earth, Air, Light, Darkness, Metal and Energy, and bring peace, balance and order to the world.
Prologue
It all began as a normal day in our Apartment in the middle of Agenta City... eight holy ancient men came to our flat. "Yes, who are you looking for?" I asked, not knowing who they were. " We are here to see your father. We have something important to say to him," one of the men said to me. I opened the door and let them in, after calling my father, of course.
"It's time. 14 years of waiting, and it is time. Bring your son and daughter here."
I was brought with my sister to them, and they announced the thing that would change my life forever.
" Ran Lei, you and you sister are the new Avatars of this land. Only you can bring peace and balance to the world. You training as the Avatar will start with the first element- Fire."
We were shocked. Never in our lives have we ever known that. We didn't want to be. We just wanted to be normal kids. But now the weight of the world was on our shoulders.
Book One - Fire
Chapter One - The First Step
"What?!Us?!" My sister said hysterically, looking as if she was about to faint.
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More coming soon.
Each planet has its own (one or two) Avatars
Elemental Quest is a story of a young boy, aged 14, named Ran Lei and his sister, Ran Kuei, 12, who discover that they are the two new Avatars of their planet. They have to master all 8 elements, in the order of Fire, Water, Ice, Earth, Air, Light, Darkness, Metal and Energy, and bring peace, balance and order to the world.
Prologue
It all began as a normal day in our Apartment in the middle of Agenta City... eight holy ancient men came to our flat. "Yes, who are you looking for?" I asked, not knowing who they were. " We are here to see your father. We have something important to say to him," one of the men said to me. I opened the door and let them in, after calling my father, of course.
"It's time. 14 years of waiting, and it is time. Bring your son and daughter here."
I was brought with my sister to them, and they announced the thing that would change my life forever.
" Ran Lei, you and you sister are the new Avatars of this land. Only you can bring peace and balance to the world. You training as the Avatar will start with the first element- Fire."
We were shocked. Never in our lives have we ever known that. We didn't want to be. We just wanted to be normal kids. But now the weight of the world was on our shoulders.
Book One - Fire
Chapter One - The First Step
"What?!Us?!" My sister said hysterically, looking as if she was about to faint.
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More coming soon.
Nicktang10- Bronze Penguin
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Re: Elemental Quest
Great start, Nicktang! I'm not going to do a full review right now, because you've only started. All I'll say is that it's best to not post a chapter at all, unless it's completed. Just my tip.
I'm looking forward to more,
Ccpenguin8
I'm looking forward to more,
Ccpenguin8
Re: Elemental Quest
I love the plot. It sounds like The End of Club Penguin Part I: Mastering the Elements. Smart minds think alike.
I can't wait to read more! Don't stop!
Sindar
I can't wait to read more! Don't stop!
Sindar
Re: Elemental Quest
Elemental Quest Book One Chapters 1&2 will be released tomorrow. Stay tuned!
Ps. I am not bumping, am I? If I am, sorry.
Ps. I am not bumping, am I? If I am, sorry.
Nicktang10- Bronze Penguin
- Posts : 319
Join date : 2012-08-06
Age : 23
Location : Singapore
Re: Elemental Quest
Nicktang10 wrote:Elemental Quest Book One Chapters 1&2 will be released tomorrow. Stay tuned!
Ps. I am not bumping, am I? If I am, sorry.
You would be bumping if you posted that on the 5th November (or after), because it would be exactly one month after Sindar posted. You're fine for now.
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