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Post  Boo492 on 31/7/2012, 4:28 am

This is a new story I've been working on, and I want to share the 3rd Chapter. It has language, but censored. It's just a part, enjoy.


Chapter 3

I woke up, not knowing what to expect. I opened my eyes a bit to see that my sister was gone. "Huh, must have gone with Mom to the mall", I thought. I went back to sleep, not knowing what would come next. My room was hot, burning in heat. I thought my sister turned on the heater to wake me up, as she usually does. "Turn off the... the heat...". Still a little drowsy from sleep, I began to rise from my deep sleep. I looked around me. Fire. It was fire that heated the room. Due to my brain effect, I wasn't sure what to do next. Sitting in my bed, I jolted when a wooden plank feel from the ceiling. I then snapped back. I ran towards the window, knowing the hallway would be pure He#l. It was a 2 story drop, about 20 feet. I stood there for 1, 10 maybe even 30 minutes looking out the window, not knowing whether to jump or not. I heard a scream. My brain effect disappeared and I, unknowingly, jumped. I landed in the backyard, dragged my self about 3 feet from the base of the house, maybe a little further. I looked at the house. I stayed there for what seemed like centuries, dazed from the pain of the jump. Finally, my house collapsed. I forgot what had happened for a while. I forgot that I lived with people. I forgot about.....my family


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Post  King Kane on 31/7/2012, 11:47 pm

It's great! And if you jumped to the backyard from my house, you would get hurt because my backyard is concrete!
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Post  MarrowbarrowCP on 1/8/2012, 7:44 pm

It's great! Can't wait for more...

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Post  Momeniccole on 5/8/2012, 11:23 pm

It was a fantastic story.I want to here more please!!! Very Happy

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Post  Maygirl2 on 19/8/2012, 6:21 am

Sound very interesting Boo, will you post more?
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Post  Ccpenguin8 on 19/8/2012, 12:46 pm

Maygirl2 wrote:Sound very interesting Boo, will you post more?

Yes, we're really excited to hear the rest.

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