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Post  Nicktang10 on 5/10/2012, 5:46 am

Based on the TV show, Avatar: The Legend of Aang and The Legend of Korra.

Each planet has its own (one or two) Avatars

Elemental Quest is a story of a young boy, aged 14, named Ran Lei and his sister, Ran Kuei, 12, who discover that they are the two new Avatars of their planet. They have to master all 8 elements, in the order of Fire, Water, Ice, Earth, Air, Light, Darkness, Metal and Energy, and bring peace, balance and order to the world.

Prologue

It all began as a normal day in our Apartment in the middle of Agenta City... eight holy ancient men came to our flat. "Yes, who are you looking for?" I asked, not knowing who they were. " We are here to see your father. We have something important to say to him," one of the men said to me. I opened the door and let them in, after calling my father, of course.

"It's time. 14 years of waiting, and it is time. Bring your son and daughter here."

I was brought with my sister to them, and they announced the thing that would change my life forever.

" Ran Lei, you and you sister are the new Avatars of this land. Only you can bring peace and balance to the world. You training as the Avatar will start with the first element- Fire."

We were shocked. Never in our lives have we ever known that. We didn't want to be. We just wanted to be normal kids. But now the weight of the world was on our shoulders.

Book One - Fire
Chapter One - The First Step

"What?!Us?!" My sister said hysterically, looking as if she was about to faint.

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Post  Gotchee on 5/10/2012, 4:12 pm

I read it, and I think it's pretty good. I like the plot! Good job Smile

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Post  Ccpenguin8 on 5/10/2012, 8:23 pm

Great start, Nicktang! I'm not going to do a full review right now, because you've only started. All I'll say is that it's best to not post a chapter at all, unless it's completed. Just my tip.

I'm looking forward to more,
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Post  Sindar Toffe on 5/10/2012, 8:37 pm

I love the plot. It sounds like The End of Club Penguin Part I: Mastering the Elements. Razz Smart minds think alike.

I can't wait to read more! Don't stop!

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Post  Nicktang10 on 3/11/2012, 9:28 am

Elemental Quest Book One Chapters 1&2 will be released tomorrow. Stay tuned!

Ps. I am not bumping, am I? If I am, sorry.
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Post  Ccpenguin8 on 3/11/2012, 10:11 am

Nicktang10 wrote:Elemental Quest Book One Chapters 1&2 will be released tomorrow. Stay tuned!

Ps. I am not bumping, am I? If I am, sorry.

You would be bumping if you posted that on the 5th November (or after), because it would be exactly one month after Sindar posted. You're fine for now. Wink

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